I can’t believe I haven’t uploaded the cover art for this book :0
Allrighty, so a good chunk of the book was recently refined and re-uploaded (nothing too major, don’t worry, the plot didn’t change) I just made the writing better and added a few small character moments that make it a smidge more enjoyable to read. If you’re interested, may I suggest Chapter... 22 was it? The Underworld. The argument between Jay and Ann is now actually fun to read. Wow. What a concept :o
Anyway, hope you awesome lads and lassies have a great week! And please, let me know what you thought of the book in the comments below! I’m always trying to improve my writing so you get the best quality content possible and that starts with you letting me know what did and didn’t work. :P
That look 🤩 Amazing! i like it a. Lot!
that... is a really great peace of artwork. truly. if you DO want some notes on improvement, then I think you should change how the water (the one that Ann is bending) looks. it's not... fluid enough? not sure how to explain it. other than that, I will check out chapter 22, thank you. keep doing what you're doing, and I just can't wait for book 2!